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nyctimes

Headline: Arson Suspect Is Held In Massachusetts Fire

Problem:  Word order gives multiple unintended interpretations. Sounds like the suspect was literally held in a fire. Severity of crime not represented.

Solution: Arson suspect arrested in connection with Massachusetts fire

Source: NYTimes.com, May 5, 1986

http://www.nytimes.com/1986/05/05/us/around-the-nation-arson-suspect-is-held-in-massachusetts-fire.html

tulsa

Headline: Federal Agents Raid Gun Shop, Find Weapons // Store Owner Arrested Previously

Problem:  Seems redundant.  Too wordy for heading. Needs sub-head.

Solution: Federal Agents Raid Gun Shop: Store Owner in Jail on previous explosives charge

Source: TulsaWorld.com, August 5, 1997
http://www.tulsaworld.com/news/article.aspx?articleID=626452

msn9

Headline: Diaz thanks fans over father’s death

Problem: Awkward. Needs additional information.

Solution: Diaz thanks fans for support after father’s death

Source: NewsNineMSN.com, April 17 2008

http://news.ninemsn.com.au/entertainment/448385/diaz-thanks-fans-over-fathers-death


Article Re-write: Before

http://www.greenbagz.com/goinggreen.html

Why Go Green?

Going green has become the hot topic item in the business world. But why go green? The earth’s population is growing at a rapid pace. It is estimated that it will reach over 9 billion by 2050. Considering the exponential growth, the amount of natural resources if evenly distributed would be only 25% of what the population of 1950 had.

A large part of the planet’s fixed natural resources are depleted by the businesses which supply people with goods and services. In order for future generations to be able to enjoy the standard of living which we are accustomed to, business must take larger steps in going green and ensuring that resources are not as rapidly exhausted.

The methods of producing energy and waste management of the industrial age must simply come to an end. Forward thinking and creative ways of dealing with environmental problems that face businesses of the current age are absolutely necessary. Companies are urged go green and provide more than the legally mandated standards for conservation. Going green helps to preserve the environment so that future generations can enjoy it much as we have.

Ways to Go Green

Going green does not require a complete business overhaul. There are effective and painless steps your business can take in order to go green and be part of the solution.

Review your energy plans. Every business requires energy to function, and green companies are no exception. Energy production leeches the most natural resources and should be the first step in going green. Installing solar panels as a form of alternative energy use can save money in the long run and harness the power of the sun, which is free to use. Businesses can also take advantage of tax breaks offered by some states who reward businesses for environmentally conscious installments.

Learn how to effectively recycle. Recycling paper reduces the amount of toxic material put into the water we drink and the soil in which our food comes from. Many companies going green offer recycled paper and other office supplies which are more eco-friendly. Business items such as obsolete computers and used ink cartridges can also be recycled and can potentially be written off as tax credits. Small steps in going green by using items such as environmentally friendly agricultural based inks and eco-friendly folders to accommodate necessary business needs can make a large positive impact. Using recycled paper and other materials as well as recycling depleted supplies are easy ways to go green and can potentially save your business money.

Be creative about your methods. If your business requires a company car, consider getting a hybrid. Research other ways for your business to go green. There are entire catalogs which offer an outline for going green and becoming a green company.

Other Benefits to Going Green

Many of the ways to go green often come with the added benefit of saving your business money. Going green can lower production costs and potentially save money, while tax write-offs are available for green businesses who have taken the initiative in doing their part to ensure the survival of the planet.

In addition to the money saving aspects involved with going green, your business will be setting a positive example in your community as well as for other businesses. The decision to go green will also result in a cleaner, healthier work environment for you and your employees. Being a green company will gain you notoriety as being a business that is part of the concerted effort in going green and ensuring a cleaner, healthier environment for all.


Article Re-write: After

Going green has become the hot topic item in the business world. But why go green?

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Consider Our Earth

The earth’s population is growing at a rapid pace. It is estimated that it will reach over 9 billion by 2050. Considering the exponential growth, the amount of natural resources if evenly distributed would be only 25% of what the population of 1950 had.

A large part of the planet’s fixed natural resources are depleted by the businesses which supply people with goods and services. In order for future generations to be able to enjoy the standard of living which we are accustomed to, business must take larger steps in going green and ensuring that resources are not as rapidly exhausted.

The methods of producing energy and waste management of the industrial age must simply come to an end. Forward thinking and creative ways of dealing with environmental problems that face businesses of the current age are absolutely necessary. Companies are urged go green and provide more than the legally mandated standards for conservation. Going green helps to preserve the environment so that future generations can enjoy it much as we have.

Ways to Go Green

Going green does not require a complete business overhaul. There are effective and painless steps your business can take in order to go green and be part of the solution.

Review your energy plans: Every business requires energy to function, and green companies are no exception. Energy production leeches the most natural resources and should be the first step in going green.

Solar Panels: Installing solar panels as a form of alternative energy use can save money in the long run and harness the power of the sun, which is free to use. Businesses can also take advantage of tax breaks offered by some states who reward businesses for environmentally conscious installments.

Recycle: Learn how to effectively recycle. Recycling paper reduces the amount of toxic material put into the water we drink and the soil in which our food comes from.

Use Recycled Products: Many companies going green offer recycled paper and other office supplies which are more eco-friendly. Business items such as obsolete computers and used ink cartridges can also be recycled and can potentially be written off as tax credits. Small steps in going green by using items such as environmentally friendly agricultural based inks and eco-friendly folders to accommodate necessary business needs can make a large positive impact. Using recycled paper and other materials as well as recycling depleted supplies are easy ways to go green and can potentially save your business money.

Hybrid vehicle: If your business requires a company car, consider getting a hybrid.

Be creative about your methods.Research other ways for your business to go green. There are entire catalogs which offer an outline for going green and becoming a green company.

Other Benefits to Going Green

- Save money
- Tax write-offs
- Set a positive example
- Healthier work environment

Many of the ways to go green often come with the added benefit of saving your business money. Going green can lower production costs and potentially save money, while tax write-offs are available for green businesses who have taken the initiative in doing their part to ensure the survival of the planet. In addition to the money saving aspects involved with going green, your business will be setting a positive example in your community as well as for other businesses. The decision to go green will also result in a cleaner, healthier work environment for you and your employees. Being a green company will gain you notoriety as being a business that is part of the concerted effort in going green and ensuring a cleaner, healthier environment for all.


Writing Sample: Headliner Re-write

Before: North Carolina livin’, plain and simple!

After:
Growing Up in North Carolina: Influences that last a lifetime


Story Fragment: Headlines

  1. U.S. Meat Imports Suspended in China
  2. Contaminated Meat from the U.S. discovered in China
  3. China Suspends U.S.  Meat Imports:  Quality, safety standards in question

North Carolina livin’, plain and simple

How my hometown influenced who I am today

My life in North Carolina has continually surprised me, yielding a diverse palate of personal interests. North Carolina, the place I wanted to escape so desperately as a child turned out to be the only place I ever want to call home as an adult.

No Safari in North Raleigh?
I am a North Carolina native, born and raised. Raleigh, Chapel Hill, and Boone are where I call home. The majority of my family is within a 180-mile area from Boone to Raleigh, with one exception, Central Africa. Four of my cousins were born and raised in the Democratic Republic of the Congo, adding a little variety to our southern simplicity. As my brother and I relied on the the Asheboro Zoo, they were on safari, checking out zebras eating foliage in their backyard. We are just a typical North Carolina family, add a little unga.

The Crew

The "Maness" Clan on any given holiday

Party Time
With 15 kids in my extended family, one kiddie table was never enough for this bunch. Huge holiday celebrations full of endless fun are vivid memories of my childhood.

On Christmas day as the presents are opened, an underlying competition is forming amongst the laughter and excitement. Everyone there, sometimes teaming up, collects an arsenal of wrapping paper, stuffing it anywhere they can find, to unleash in a fury as soon as the last gift is unveiled.

Birthday celebrations are also a spectacle and are rarely missed because we live close enough to get together with little effort. The most embarrassing tradition is the infamous serenade. Whatever comes to mind at the time is usually what occurs as everyone sings their rendition of Happy Birthday. As an adult, I am grateful for and cherish our strong family environment and am mindful to not take this gift for granted.

Fly fishing on the Holston

My first rainbow trout

Here kitty kitty kitty
Family time in Boone made an enormous impact on who I am today. Frequent exposure to the outdoors is something I plan to provide for my own children. My aunt married a true New Yorker and I remember the first time he joined the family on one of our many camping trips. Trying to be sympathetic to his inexperience, my parents chose a location with a few amenities rather than shocking him with none. That evening he was spotted heading to the bathroom, unknown to him, with no electricity, carrying in hand a copy of the New York Times. His only response when told there were no lights was, “well, you did bring a lightbulb didn’t you?”

Also, if a 2 year old says, “here kitty kitty kitty”, it doesn’t mean they have found a cat. If you try to pet skunks you are going to get sprayed.

Many life lessons can be taught camping in the woods for both adults and kids alike. My family eventually bought a cabin near the base of Grandfather Mountain. This added a new element to our beloved time spent exploring and enjoying the vast mountain terrain of NC but never changed the value of packing up a tent and hitting the road. I look forward to sharing similar experiences when I have children.

If ya can’t beat ‘em, join ‘em
One would think I was born a North Carolina activist after reading my joyful childhood memories. This genuine affection is actually a very “adult” rationale and far cry from my plea growing up.  I wanted out. Now, I cannot imagine living anywhere other than North Carolina. Two hours from beautiful beaches and mountains, four differentiating seasons, steady economic growth with a reasonable cost of living, and a wonderful dwelling for young people, as reported in “Best of” polls year after year. Bringing in top 10 ranking for a lineup hard to overlook, Raleigh consistently makes the cut.

The biggest move I ultimately made was in fact barely a move at all. To Chapel Hill I went for college and still live today. I do plan on eventually returning to Raleigh, where my parents still reside, but for the time being am incredibly happy in Chapel Hill.

Chillin with my Homies in Chapel Hill

My favorite tarheels

My 30th Birthday

"March Maness""

There is NO place like home
In the end, my decision to stay came as no surprise. My life  in Raleigh, Chapel Hill, and Boone, North Carolina yields a diverse set of interests. With the added happiness of having my loved ones close by, embracing my hometown came very easy.  North Carolina, the place I wanted to escape so desperately as a child turned out to be the only place I ever want to call home as an adult.

Please review the frequently asked questions for the distance education programs at the North Carolina Occupational Safety and Health Education and Research Center (NC OSHERC).  If you need additional assistance, please feel free to contact us at info.ncosherc.distance@unc.edu

Occupational Health Nursing – Distance Education

FAQ

Master of Public Health (MPH) in Occupational Health Nursing

How do I apply?

When are applications due?

Is the program all online?

How much does the program cost?

How long does the program take to complete?

Are scholarships available? Can I apply for financial aid?

How do I apply for funding?

Occupational Health Nursing Certificate

When are applications due?

Are the credits from the certificate program transferable into the masters program?

How much does the program cost?

How do I apply?

Do I have to complete the certificate program to sit for the  COHN or COHN-S Certification Exam?


Master of Public Health (MPH) in Occupational Health Nursing

How do I apply?

Admissions for all graduate programs are coordinated through the Graduate School. Please review the Admissions Instructions for Applicants. You can complete the Graduate School Application Online. Please contact Judy Ostendorf (judy_ostendorf@unc.edu) or Bonnie Rogers (rogersb@email.unc.edu) for any questions regarding the program, or consult the Student Handbook (pdf).

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When are applications due?

Fall – April 1

Spring – October 1

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Is the program all online?

The program of study is divided between internet-based learning, independent study, and on-campus study for 2 summer sessions, 1 week each.

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How much does it cost?

The current tuition rate for North Carolina residents is $357 per credit hour.  The current out-of-state tuition rate is $714 per credit hour.  All applicants who claim to be North Carolina legal residents for tuition purposes must file a Residency Status Form with their application

Tuition rates and fees are determines by the NC legislature and, therefore, are subject to change without notice.  There is an additional registration fee of $32 per semester in addition to tuition for the Fall and Spring Semesters and $1.21 per credit hour for the summer semester.

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How long does it take to complete?

The program can be completed in approximately 2-2½ years, but you will have five years from admission to complete the program of study.

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Is there funding?

Yes, tuition assistance is usually available; however, the amount of assistance available depends on the number of students enrolled and other variables.

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How do I apply for funding?

There is no application for funding. All enrolled students may receive NIOSH funding. Please contact Judy Ostendorf (judy_ostendorf@unc.edu) for further information.

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Occupational Health Nursing Certificate

When are applications due?

The application deadline for the fall semester is April 1.  Please note there are limited spaces available in the program.  Applying early will provide a better opportunity for admission.  For more information, or consult the Student Handbook (pdf).

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Are the credits from the certificate program transferrable into the masters program?

All credits earned are completely transferable (for 10 years) as part of the requirements for the completion of the OHN Concentration MPH degree.

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How much does the program cost?

The current tuition rate for North Carolina residents is $308 per credit hour.  The current out-of-state tuition rate is $616 per credit hour.  All applicants who claim to be North Carolina legal residents for tuition purposes must file a Residency Status Form with their application.

Tuition rates and fees are determines by the NC legislature and, therefore, are subject to change without notice.  There is an additional registration fee of $32 per semester in addition to tuition for the Fall and Spring Semesters and $1.21 per credit hour for the summer semester.

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How do I apply?

Application forms and materials will only be accepted online via the application website.  There is no application fee required.

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Do I have to complete the certificate program to sit for the Certified Occupational Health Nurse (COHN) or Certified Occupational Health Nurse-Specialist (COHN-S) Certification Exam?

Not necessarily. Please review the criteria chart below. For additional information about exam eligibility, please visit American Board of Occupational Health Nurses webpage.


Spokeo, Privacy Policy Response

I mistakenly signed on to this site through a sponsored link while participating in a people searching lesson for class. I was actually looking for Spock not Spokeo,  which seem intentionally similar in name.  Without reading any information on the site, I signed in using my gmail account. This required entering my password. Immediately, all my contacts were uploaded and I was concerned I had exposed my entire address book and list of contacts to potential solicitation. Spokeo is not my favorite website, as requested for this week’s assignment, but I was interested in their posted privacy policy agreement. This is something I should have done before agreeing to their terms by creating an account.

Spokeo presents itself, indicated on their homepage, as a site to “Uncover personal photos, videos, and secrets….GUARANTEED”.  The site searches 48 major social networks to “find truly mouth-watering news about friends and coworkers”.

About Spokeo describes, in detail, the function of the site if you would like to read further.

My concerns and reactions, based on Spokeo’s posted Privacy Policy:

Who has access to my gmail password and is this information stored?

Spokeo has a one-way cryptographic hash function that is also used by banks and financial institutions. Apparently, that means my passwords are safe? Banking related identity theft is common so this comparison does not necessarily ensure security.

The “Collected Private Content” section explains that the login credentials are only used for the one-time address book import and will not be stored. This is referring to when I entered the site and created an account.

You can also use this site to sign on 3rd party accounts to syndicate all your public websites. Those include the 48 mentioned social networks that contain public information. If you choose this feature, you will be entering the password associated with each of your accounts.

Have I exposed my contact list to spam and/or other solicitation?

The site specifically states that they do not email your contacts in any way for any purpose. This statement is more addressing the issue of, will people know I am searching for them, rather than, will you be selling these addresses to marketing agencies who will be emailing my contact list. As mentioned previously, they do describe their one-way cryptographic hash function that is also used by banks and financial institutions.  Honestly, I have no idea what that means, but by stating banks and financial institutions use it, Spokeo is attempting to create a sense of security by association.

Since no one, including Spokeo employees, has access to passwords, I can only assume there is no access to the contacts within my login account, which is what I was most concerned about.

The bottom line about Spokeo:

Spokeo detects any changes that are made regarding the privacy policies of the 48 supported services , which are then reflected in the cashed content. Spokeo calls this “mirroring technology”. Their system reflects the latest privacy settings within the 3rd party sites, and then updates their database accordingly. Meaning, if someone changes an account to private, say MySpace, Spokeo will also reflect those changes and no longer provide information from that site.

Spokeo does not assume responsibility if information is abused. This makes sense because all information displayed is public content and can be acquired directly, without the use of Spokeo. The definition of public content, as provided on the website is, “any information on the Web that is accessible by anyone without special user credentials or permissions”.

***Most comical is their all caps disclaimer, “SPOKEO, INC. DOES NOT GUARANTEE ERROR-FREE PERFORMANCE.”. What this means is, we will try to do all of the things we say but it’s not guaranteed to work. So, good luck!

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Legal counsel to MyFacebookSpaceNews.com

In the example, Simmons libel suit seems to fulfil the three essential ingredients, published, false (claimed by Simmons), and defamatory.

Simmons defamation should have been under the “libel by interpretation” category. Simmons only chance of winning this trial would have been to prove that an interpretation of the article is defamatory.

Fortunately for MyFacebookSpaceNews.com, his charge of libel per se will not stand up in court. The statements in the article were not directly claiming he was drunk or is stupid. The interpretation is what would lead someone to think those things.

Negligence will be the requisite standard of fault in this case. Malice is doubtful because, as a private citizen, Simmons only has to prove negligence.

The articles says that he was arrested on suspicion of drunken driving not that he was actually driving drunk. We have no additional information about if he was, in fact, drunk. The “faces more very serious charges” is not specifically saying he was drunk either, and could be referring to charges he will face due to the accident in general.

Another point in favor of the news site is the he was not directly called stupid, which is key to his claim. The bicyclist said, “people like that guy are just too stupid”. The quote used by the reporter was a reckless choice. Though it should not have been published, I do not think it will hold up in court.  There was nothing negligent said in that quote because being in a rush isn’t a crime and how does that relate to knowing when it’s unsafe to drive? The quote says nothing about Simmons, in particular, being drunk and stupid.

The First Amendment opinion defense could be a possibility for the “stupid” statement. This quote is the opinion of a witness to the accident and is her right to state. The subjective statements in the quote cannot be proven true or false. I don’t really see a strong case for Simmons and the news site will probably not have to consider this additional defense.

All in all, this seems like a weak case for Simmons.

Safety of Raleigh’s homeless community in question

Community speaks out

Raleigh – Accusations were made that describe a direct correlation between Raleigh’s homeless shelter safety and prison release policy.  During a Downtown Raleigh Alliance meeting, where continuing  meal distribution to homeless persons at Moore Square Park was discussed, Bill Werdel, a well-known community activist, said,  “Most folks who come to Saturday meals do not and, moreso, will not stay at the shelter [South Wilmington St. Men’s Center].” Describing the shelter as, “a very rough place” and an “annex for the correctional center [Central Prison].”

Bill  has a relationship with many of the men who stay, or have stayed, at the local shelters. On weekends, his ministry provides hot meals at Moore Square to those in need.

Bill made clear that men voice general safety concerns and overall apprehension about staying at the South Wilmington Street Center, as though the correctional facility has used the shelter as a default release plan.  Saying, that upon release,  inmates are given $45 and the address to the shelter. The concerns he expressed were not to present the shelter in a negative light because, in fact, he believes it to be a “well-designed and funded program,” more that there is a breakdown in the system.

From inside the prison walls

Sergeant Joanne  Duda, from the Records Office at Central Prison, in the heart of Downtown Raleigh, says, on the contrary, “shelters are the last-ditch effort when we have exhausted all other resources.” She makes clear, that inmates always leave with a plan; whether they stick to that plan may be another story. The $45 upon release is something that does occur at Central Prison, but the circumstances are very specific. According to Duda, if an inmate’s time served is over 24 months active duty, they are released with the monies in their personal account and $45, called a gate-check.  Arrangements are made to get any inmate to where they are heading.

The prison has a wide range of functions, and houses inmates serving anything from “misdemeanor crimes to HCON [high control facility].” There is an infirmary, mental health facility, and a processing center for men with long-term sentences just entering the prison system. Because the inmates range in custody level, there is not a single answer to what type of rehabilitation, if any, the inmates will receive. But what was clear, according to Duda, is that the plan is never a cash-out and bus ticket to the local shelter.

According to the Shelter

Frank Lawrence, Director of the South Wilmington Street Shelter, says he works very closely with Central prison. When asked the question about his shelter becoming an annex for the facility, he said,  “We have an understood working arrangement. There are circumstances where part of an inmate’s release plan is our facility but that is specifically coordinated in advance. A P.O. [police officer] will actually bring them over to the shelter and then they can request a bed or apply for permanent bed.” It is true that the “shelter isn’t suitable for everyone” and they may “decide this is not what they want or need.”

With the main issue being safely, Frank was clear to say, “Honestly, in the 5 years I have worked here, I have never felt my safety was at risk. I have never felt concerned by being here.” There is a deputy on duty 24-hours a day at the South Wilmington Street Center.

Lawrence believes that the change does not need to come from the prison system and that  “the main concern is housing.” That “without housing, the men cannot stay off streets,” and then “may reconnect with those who have not committed to change, and revert back.”  He has the capabilities to help them find a job and save money, but “can’t have confidence that they can find housing”. “We are sensitive to that barrier,” not being able to complete the puzzle, which “makes it hard to help,” Lawrence says, with a sigh of disappointment.  He feels that safety of the shelter and prison policies are not the problem, “this is a valuable resource and the population realizes it,” and that “this is actually the safest place for many of them to go.”

Men on the streets tell their experiences

Members of the homeless community in Moore Square express varying tales of their experience, feeling of security, and overall impression of the South Wilmington Street Shelter. What does seem clear is that she shelter means different things to different people.

Myron Hunter, 37, a native of the area who was once on the streets, says, “Moore Square has changed.” None of this was around here, as he points at the Magnet Middle School, Museum, and specialty shops.

“These new people get tense when they come around here, like we’re animals.” That in the shelter, safe or not, “you are around criminals, around sex offenders, crack addicts, homos, 15, 16, 17-year-old kids, and convicts. You have to treat your surroundings accordingly.” But, in the end, Hunter wholeheartedly expresses that the shelter provides a superior program and offers many men an opportunity to revitalize their life.

Don Davis, 59, a shelter resident and part of a 6-month Human Resources Development (HRD) Program says, he has “Nothing to complain about. Nothing.” That “it’s a good program; people make what they want of it.” His program helps residents work on their resume and learn critical job interviewing skills. If they are to find a job, they can advance to the next level where they have a key to their own room. If agreed upon, the shelter holds 80% of their check in order to promote savings and prepare for life outside the shelter walls.

Regarding safety, Don said that the reason some people don’t join the program or stay at the shelter  isn’t safety, but is because, in the program, where you also have a permanent bed, there is a strict zero tolerance policy about drinking. He says, “Most people there [at the shelter] have no money. If they have money they go and get drunk or get a hotel room. When he hears complaints about having to sleep on the streets for the night, “I don’t feel sorry for them, it’s their fault! I say, get in the program!” Davis felt the issue was more about the rules than the idea of not being safe. He said, at the shelter, you “have rules and you have to go by the rules. Imagine how crazy the world would be without rules.”

These rules are only part of what made the shelter a less than ideal choice for, previously homeless, Wilber Davis, 60. He lived on the streets for nine years in the Raleigh area and has been off the streets for 3. He did stay at the shelter but found it was, “easier and safer to just stay on the streets.”  Wilber witnessed, while a shelter resident, “a lot of people breaking rules who are mixed up with people trying to better themselves. Everyone is in your business. It is hard already to be in this situation.”  Wilber says, they do have a  “search down for weapons but people always find a way to get them in. Seen a lot of knives in there. If a fight break out, they might hide the knife outside the building. If you get in a fight they put you both out.” He compared the shelter to a prison, with shanks and other makeshift weapons. He also mentions that there is an officer on duty, as others have pointed out, but there are also a large number of residents at the facility. Wilber, in a bold statement towards the true identity of the shelter says, “they are putting on a good show but anyone can put on a good show, “ not letting what is really happening on the inside leak into public visibility.

All shelter residents, past and present, express how complicated it is to have so many people, as said by Wilber, “in your business. It is hard already to be in this situation.”

Who can we blame

None of the Shelter residents were previous inmates at Central Prison and could not offer any details as to what they personally experienced or witnesses coming from the facility.  Weighing the pros and cons to what the facility means to an individual seems to be the driving force for an interpretation of the overall shelter safety. There is no denying, safety must be taken into consideration and is a real concern, but to what extent is unknown. Regardless, to fully utilize the resources of the shelter and make life changes to get off the streets, the choice has to come from within and that is not what everyone seems to want. Tolerance for rules, shelter safety, and long-term intentions drive what the shelter can provide for each person. Community and housing, which should not be overlooked, may affect what happens next.

Below is the detailed information from my interviews. I have included the notes I made to myself during the process in addition to the questions I asked each source.

The concept of my topic, shelter safety and Central Prison policies,  derived from a statement made at the meeting I attended for a live blog assignment. The impact of distributing meals in Moore Square to those in need was discussed.  The following statement was made but not explored during the meeting.

“Most folks who come to Saturday meals do not, and more so will not stay at the shelter [South Wilmington Street Center].”

  • Very rough place.
  • Has become annex for the correctional center
  • Given 45$ and the address of shelter
  • Safety issues

Through reaching out to local ministries, who have frequent contact with involved parties, shelter reps, shelter residents, and prison reps,  I took this statement to the streets and found out what people had to say.

All my facts were checked through direct contact. Most information from my report is based on personal experience.

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Bill Werdel: Sacred Heart Cathedral
919-881-9611

Notes: Contact first – before reaching out to mentioned facilities.Bill distributes meals in Moore Square and is very dedicated to the community, specifically, Raleigh’s homeless population.

I noted your statement at the Downtown Alliance meeting and it really struck a cord.

“Most folks who come to Saturday meals do not, and more so will not stay at the shelter [South Wilmington Street Center].”

  • Very rough place.
  • Has become annex for the correctional center
  • Given 45$ and the address of shelter
  • Safety issues

We really didn’t get to delve deeper on this topic, as it was not the premise of the meeting, but I want to know more about what you think.

Questions:

  1. Where was this statement coming from? How do you know this?
    Folks that he gets to know on a regular basis. He always asks, “Do you have a place to stay?” There are men who will not stay at the shelter because it is too rough. Men express general safety issues and an overall apprehension about staying there.
  2. Was there an occurrence that made you aware of the situation?
    Regular folks have said it’s too rough and have dealt with theft. Some are very private and can be paranoid, but justifiably because the dangers are real. It’s mostly the “gentle folks” who don’t want to deal with it. Lose their privacy. This is not to bad mouth the shelter; it is a well designed and funded program. Usually a police officer present. They have a graduated program with bed lottery for overnighters. 80 program beds where you can leave your belongings.
  3. Where does the problem lie?
    The shelter started as an overnight stay facility and you had to leave in the morning (created by the faith community). Lobbied for permanent institution for homeless and finally Wake County stepped in and took ownership. Think there is a breakdown in the system. The correctional facility uses the shelter as a default.

Anne Werdel: Sacred Heart Cathedral
919-881-9611

Notes: Spoke to Ann briefly when attempting to contact Bill. She was also at the meeting where shelter statement was made.

I noted a comment your husband made at the Downtown Raleigh Alliance meeting regarding safety at the South Wilmington Street Shelter.

Questions:

  1. Do you have anything to add to his statement?
    Oh yes, men are released with 45$ and address of shelter.
    Issue of how many released are returning to prison. No preparation for release thus continuing the vicious cycle.
    Felony background and housing is an issue and complexes are not renting to those with criminal history.Involved in grassroots org group CSJ gathering of people who are pastors or reps of congregating advocacy group. Gathering people to speak for those who don’t have voice, help with making better laws and regulations.Advocating on behalf of:  2 main task forces:

     

    • Affordable housing
    • Issues that people who are incarcerated face. Plan when release from incarceration. “Community Corrections”

    Use the presence of many people to get city to agree to create affordable housing committee and to look at city plans

South Wilmington Street Center (1420 S. Wilmington St.) http://www.wakegov.com/humanservices/housing/homeless/default.htm

919-857-9428

Notes:
*Remember to make clear this is not an attack on the shelter*
Left message for Frank Lawrence, DirectorFind info on David Harris (?) Who is he?

Questions: Frank Lawrence, Director

  1. How do you feel about the annex statement?
    We work very closely with Central Prison. There are circumstances where part of an inmate’s release plan is our facility but that is specifically coordinated in advance. P.O. will actually bring them over to the shelter and then they can request a bed or apply for permanent bed.
  2. Is it true (annex statement)?
    No. But a shelter isn’t suitable for everyone. After coming they might decide this is not what they want or need.
  3. Do you feel safe and do think your men feel safe?
    “Honestly, in the 5 years I have worked here, I have never felt my safety was at risk. I have never felt concerned by being here. The men are very courteous and really value this resource. This is a valuable resource and the population realizes it. Most are quick to tell when something is going on.” This is actually the safest place for many of them to go. Deputy on duty 24 hours a day.
    People come from all over who want and need help. “We are here for people who can’t get shelter elsewhere. We never turn anyone down who needs shelter.”
  4. Do you think something needs to change?
    In regards to transitioning, I fell like we have an understood working arrangement. We are contacted [by the correctional center] and can prepare to receive them and provide the assistance needed. As long as that can continues, no.
  5. What should be done?
    In general, housing is what is needed. Even after some have saved and have the money for an apartment many places will not rent to someone with a record. Acceptance in the community is an issue.
    At the shelter, we can have a plan. We can do this, and this, and this [referring to help them get a job, save money, and find housing]. Can’t have confidence that can find housing. We are sensitive to that barrier, makes it hard to help. Community needs to be sensitive. The men want that. Without housing, the men cannot stay off streets. “May reconnect with those who have not committed to change, and revert back.” Housing First!
  6. Do you ever kick anyone out?
    [Chuckle] There are center rules and if those rules are broken, they may be asked to leave. But we don’t “kick out.”

Central Prison:  919-733-0800

http://www.doc.state.nc.us/dop/prisons/central.htm

Notes:Maybe discharge person?Spoke to Captain Hail, very helpful. Sergeant Joanne Duda, Records Office, Manager. Ext. 543

Questions: Sergeant Joanne Duda

  1. What is your policy on release? Regular inmates (which is anyone not labeled medical or mental) are usually released to family and friends. Medical or mental are required by law to have a social worker place them. There is a specific aftercare plan. Appointments are set up. Very specific.
  2. What do you think about the annex statement? Shelters are the last ditch effort when we have exhausted all other resources.
  3. Is it true that they leave with 45$ and the shelter address? There is something called a gate check. If an inmate served over 24 months active duty they are released with the $ in their account and 45$. Arrangements are made to get any inmate to where they are heading.
  4. Are they receiving any training to increase their chance of not returning to this life? Because of the type of facility, this varies because of the ranging custody levels of inmates. We are also a processing center but most of the population is 10 yrs or more. There is a program DART (Drug Alcohol Recovery Treatment) and education program where inmates can earn their GED.
  5. Is there a plan? Incarceration plan? Wake correctional center is a very unique place. We house anywhere from misdemeanor to H-Con (high control) inmates. There is a medical facility, inmates receiving hospice, there are sex offenders that also have to have a place to go. Sex offenders released all the time that have to have a plan.

Info from website:

http://www.doc.state.nc.us/dop/CPtour/work.htm The prison serves many functions. It houses the state’s execution chamber, deathwatch area and men’s death row. The infirmary and mental health facility serve the needs of male inmates from around the state. It also serves as a diagnostic center, the point of entry into the prison system for male felons, age 22 years or older with sentences greater than 20 years.

Homeless Persons, Shelter Residents:

Notes: Head to Moore Square after Brown Bag ministries meal distribution to talk to people. Unscripted other than have you ever stayed at the Shelter and describe safety.

Don Davis, 59. September 4, 1950.
Shelter resident and in the program for 3 months.

He is part of the HRD Classes (Human Resources Development) and is in “the program”. “You work on your resume and they teach you what to do in a job interview.”

Most people there have no money. If they have money they go and get drunk or get a hotel room.

Nothing to complain about. Nothing.

Police are there.

“Have rules and you have to go by the rules. Imagine how crazy the world would be without rules.”

That’s the reason a lot of people don’t go, because they can’t drink.

“I don’t feel sorry for them; it’s their fault! I say, get in the program.”

“It’s a good program; people make what they want of it.”

A and B are emergency, overnight beds – general population. The program gives you a 6-month bed where you can also leave your belongings. C and D dorms are program beds. E dorm, you get a key, this is after you get a job.  The program will hold on to 80% of your check and help you save and get a place to live if you want.

“Bud Man Hurley” wished to remain anonymous.

Has been here [Raleigh] 4 months. Was “kicked out” of the program for drinking. Have a Breathalyzer if need to be used and drinking is a strict rule. They give you piss-test. Don corrected, “That’s a screen test, Sir.”

Mr. Hurley is trying to get back in the program and must complete 4 classes. “Some will complete the 4 classes then, come payday (ss check, etc – typically Friday), not show up.

There are a lot of people there that help you.

He has been in and out of jail, 3 times this month and “hundreds” of times overall.

Fight to protect yourself on the streets.

Myron Hunter, 37, was a resident of South Wilmington Shelter.

“You are around criminals; you have to treat your surroundings accordingly. Around sex offenders, crack addicts, homos, 15, 16, 17 year old kids, convicts. Moore Square has changed. None of this was around here [pointing at private school, businesses, Museum]. These new people get tense when they come around here, like were animals.”

Wilber Davis, 60, November 11, 1949.

Notes: Was on the streets 9 years. Has been off the streets for 3.Bill Werdel gave me Wilber’s contact information as one of his sources.

Questions:

Why would you not stay in shelter? What did you witness?
I have stayed in the shelter.

Have search down for weapons but people always find a way to get them in. Seen a lot of knives in there. If a fight break out, they might hide the knife outside the building. If you get in a fight they put you both out. If somebody starts an argument you both get out.

If you’re a Christian there are a lot who aren’t so it’s coming at you both ways. [Staff and residents] Don’t treat you right. They are putting on a good show and anyone can put on a good show. Then there’s the inside.

There is a lottery and when calling out the numbers a staff may have to go do something else and when they come back may have skipped numbers and not start where they ended. Not taking it as seriously as they should.

Might be out of beds but if you slide a couple of bucks, oh wait; now they have something.

There is an officer on duty but there are a lot of people.

A lot of folks with mental problems and then there are big guys and will wait for you outside building where you are not protected. A lot of fights inside and then they wait until your outside. Just like being in prison.

Easier and safer to just stay on the streets.

The rules are hard, very strict. Have rules and people will tell on you. A lot of people breaking rules mixed up with people trying to better themselves. Everyone is in your business. It is hard already to be in this situation.

It’s hard enough being there to then having people picking on you. Then if there are arguments, I just didn’t want to deal with it. You can’t say your opinion.

The shelter is not a good environment in an already bad environment.

Additional Sources:

Helen Wright Center for Women: 833-1748
http://www.urbanmin.org/services/women.php

Notes: Call Amanda Blue Lead Case ManagerCenter 833-1748; 256-2178?Missed call Friday, November 11. Too late to pursue. Dropped Womens facility from report.
  1. How do you feel about the annex statement?
  2. Is it true?
  3. Do you see the same thing happening at your facility coming from NCCIW
  4. Do you feel safe and do think your residents feel safe?
  5. Do you think something needs to change?
  6. What should be done?
  7. Have you seen direct or residual effects from this?
  8. What percent of woman in the shelter are coming from prisons?

North Carolina Correctional Institution for Women: 919-733-4340

http://www.doc.state.nc.us/dop/prisons/ncciw.htm

Notes: Did not reach Helen Wright Center in time to include in article.

  1. Are those leaving your facility improved?
  2. What is your policy on release?
  3. What do you think about the annex statement?
  4. Is it true that they leave with 45$ and the shelter address?
  5. Are they receiving any training to increase their chance of not returning to this life?
  6. Is there a plan? Incarceration plan
  7. What should be done in your professional opinion?

CSJ Task Force (Congregation for Social Justice)

Find phone# and informationKathy Rossikathyrossi@bellsouth.net

Didn’t contact. little information found in the internet on the group. Not pertinent to this article.


Brown Bag Ministry:

Mary Jo Bukowski
919-367-0766

Gave information about Bryan Hamilton and SageWorks, Inc.

Just won man of the ________? Goes into Prison and does something. Teaches something. Prison Ministry?

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